Mario's Koopamon Adventure

By crankymama5452

Chapter 25: The Road to the Final Challenge

Mario and his friends are on the way to the Elite Four after winning badge 8.

Mario: Almost done!

Smithy: Yet the five hardest lay ahead.

Jr: Sounds hard.

Peach: Yeah.

Roy: Hey, Mario, you don't own six Koopamon.

Mario: To challenge the Elite Four you need six Koopamon in case you reach the Champ. I know.

Smithy: Haha, so true.

Mario looks at Smithy.

Smithy: What? I just stated you were right.

Peach: Okay...

Roy: The Koopamon League is just ahead.

Mario and friends arrive a half hour later.

Mario: Just ahead, eh?

Lady: Hello. Which of you are signing up for the Elite Four challenge?

Mario: Me!

Lady: Okay. Go through into the elevator and it'll take you to match one. Each time you win you'll take the elevator behind the opponent to the next challenge. The Champion will battle on the balcony 1,000,000 feet
over land. A match is three-on-three and the champ in six-on-six. You have more than one guest so you have to pick one to follow and the others will watch from a window overlooking the battle room.

Mario: Let's-a go!

Smithy: I'll follow. I can aid you with tips.

Mario: Okay!
 

Chapter 26: An Old Friend Returns

Mario and Smithy are seen exiting the elevator to see Cackletta.

Mario: CACKLETTA, remember me?

Cackletta: Yes I do. I knew you'd get here.

Mario: I'm going to win this time!

Smithy: Mario, take my Bulky Bob-omb.

Mario: LET'S-A GO!

Cackletta: GO, ANUBOO!

Mario: Go, Ice Puff!

Cackletta: USE TELEPORT!

Mario: Whirlwind!

Anuboo disappears.

Mario: I know this trick. Spin and use your Whirlwind!

Ice Puff begins spinning and blowing wind until Anuboo is blown into a wall.

Smithy: Good one!

Cackletta: Use Burn Laser!

Anuboo fires a flaming laser that hits Ice Puff right on target.

Mario: NO!

Cackletta: Use Shadow Ball!

Anuboo begins forming a big, black, glowing energy ball.

Mario: Get ready...

Anuboo fires the shadow ball.

Mario: Whirlwind!

Ice Puff blows the shadow ball back into Anuboo.

Cackletta: NO!

Mario: Ice Ball!

Ice Puff knocks Anuboo out with an ice ball.

Cackletta: Return! You've gotten good! Go, Dark Boo!

Mario: Use your Ice Ball!

Cackletta: Bide!

The ice ball hits.

Mario: Again!

It hits.

Mario: Again!

It hits.

Mario: Now the last and most powerful. Ice Ball!

It hits.

Cackletta: Unleash Bide!

Dark Boo shoots forward and rams Ice Puff, sending it crashing into a wall and knocking it out.

Mario: Return! Go Bulky Bomb!

Smithy smiles and Cackletta frowns.

Mario: Shockwave!

The blue homing blast of lightning knocks Dark Boo out.

Cackletta: Return! Go Boolossus!

Mario: It's back.

Cackletta: Transparency and Shadow Ball on multiple angles!

Mario: Flame Explosion!

Bulky explodes in a blast of flames, heavily damaging Boolossus and knocking itself out.

Mario: Return! Go Boss Bass!

Cackletta: It evolved. Lick!

Boolossus goes to slap Boss Bass with a super long tongue.

Mario: Bounce!

Boss Bass bounces up and crashes down on Boolossus's tongue.

Cackletta: GRRRR... Use your Bounce!

Boolossus bounces high into the air.

Mario: Bad move. Get ready!

Cackletta: Shadow Ball!

Mario: That wasn't suposed to happen...

The shadow ball hits hard.

Mario: Use your Waterfall!

Water falls from nowhere and hits Boolossus, sending it crashing into the ground.

Cackletta: NO!

Mario: Hydro Pump

The huge blast of water sends Boolossus flying into a wall, knocking it out.

Cackletta: Return!

Mario: I did it!

Cackletta: Trust me, I am a rookie compared to the others.

Mario: Mamamia!

Cackletta: Well, goodbye until you come back this way after winning or losing.

Mario: Bye!

Mario and Smithy get in the elevator.

Peach, Roy, and Jr: Come on, up the stairs!

They follow Mario and Smithy to battlefield two.
 

Chapter 27: The Biggest of Surprises

Mario and the gang reach the second of the Elite battlefields.

Mario: Wait...

Smithy: Yes?

Mario: Where is Elite Four number two?

Smithy grins.

Mario: And how is this funny?

Smithy walks to the other end of the room in front of the elevator and turns, facing Mario.

Mario: Can you open the elevator?

Smithy: I CHALLENGE YOU AS ELITE FOUR NUMBER 2!

Mario, Peach, Roy, and Jr: NO WAY!

Smithy: Let's do it! GO MECHAKOOPA!

Mario: ... Oh, GO Ice Puff!

Smithy: Use Flamethrower!

Mario: Whirlwind!

The wind blows out the flames.

Smithy: Bite!

Mario: Ice Ball!

The ice ball hits and sends Mechakoopa into a wall but unharmed.

Mario: What? How? USE YOUR ICE BEAM!

The beam hits and freezes Mechakoopa.

Smithy: Flamethrower!

The ice melts.

Mario: Ice Beam 'til you can't shoot anymore!

The beam hits and eventually Mechakoopa drops.

Smithy: I planped it with a Koopamon of high special defense to wear your Koopamon out.

Mario: Grrrrr...

Smithy: GO ROBO-CHOMP!

Mario: Use your Slam

Smithy: Open wide and Chomp attack!

Ice Puff flies into the crunch and is knocked out.

Mario: Return and go, Boomerang Bro!

Smithy: Okay, use Thunder!

Mario: Dodge and Boomerang Cutter!

Smithy: NO!

The cutter knocks Robo-Chomp out.

Smithy: RETURN AND I CHOOSE MECHA-BLOOPER!

Mario: Whoa!

Smithy: Mamamia!

Mario: O_O

Smithy: Use Torpedo Bomb!

Mario: Bomberang!

The torpedos destroy the boomerang and knock out Boomerang Bro.

Mario: Return! Go, Boss Bass!

Smithy: Thought so.

Mario: Use Bounce!

Smithy: Use your Hydro Pump!

The blast sends Boss Bass into the roof, severely injuring it.

Mario: GRRRRRRRRRR, use Waterfall!

The waterfall crashes down and rusts Mecha-Blooper.

Smithy: HOW?

Mario: Use Ice Beam!

The ice beam freezes its torpedo tentacles.

Mario: BOUNCE!

Boss Bass bounces up and comes down and smashes the torpedoes.

Smithy: AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH! USE HYPER BEAM IMMEDIATELY!

Mario: Hydro Pump!

Due to being weakened, the hydro pump overcomes the hyper beam and blasts and knocks Mecha-Blooper out.

Smithy: Return! Good job! The last two before the Champ are ranked powerful enough to take 20 Koopamon out using just a single Koopamon.

Mario: MAMAMIA!

Smithy: Fare well!

Mairo heads to the elevator, ending this fight. Another step to victory has been taken.
 

Chapter 28: A Mystical Battle

Mario has just used the elevator to reach match three of the Elite Four to see an alien-like person.

Tatanga: I am Tatanga. I am a master of the powers of the telepathy, telekinesis, and other psychic powers. I see your friends are in the side watch room! Bring one here.

Peach is brought in!

Mario: Hi, Peach.

Peach: Hi.

Tatanga: Now that you have a friend with you, we can begin.

Mario: Yes!

Tatanga: Heh... GO MAGIKOOPA!

Mario: Go Para-Worm!

Tatanga: Use your Metronome!

Mario: Silver Wind!

Magikoopa performs magic and a reflect wall appears, blocking silver wind from hitting,

Tatanga: USE YOUR ILLUSION WAVE!

Magikoopa shoots at Para-Worm, leaving clones behind! When he reaches he goes through Para-Worm.
Mario: What

Tatanga: PSYBEAM!

The Magikoopa in front of Para-Worm shoots a beam, blasting Para-Worm to the ground.

Mario: NO!

Peach: Don't give up! Psychics hate bug moves.

Mario: Silver Wind!

Tatanga: Use Metronome!

Mario: NOW USE SLAM!

Para-Worm knocks Magikoopa off its feet and silver wind hits.

Tatanga: No... Use Metronome!

Magikoopa performs a spell, then it jumps up and performs a spin kick, sending Para-Worm into a wall.

Mario: NO! Use your Tail Bash!

Para-Worm bashes its tail down on Magikoopa's head.

Tatanga: Oh, how pathetic.

Mario: Use Silver Wind!

Tatanga: Use your Psybeam!

The blasts collide and both Koopamon receive equal damage.

Mario and Tatanga: NO!

Mario: Finish off with Tail Bash!

Para-Worm knocks Magikoopa out by bashing it with his tail.

Tatanga: Return! GO, SHAMAN!

Mario: Use your Gust!

Tatanga: Use Reflect!

Shaman protects itself with a wall of light.

Tatanga: Use Toxic with Reflect and Light Screen!

Shaman poisons Para-Worm and holds protective walls up to protect itself.

Mario: Just use endless Silver Wind!

Para-Worm knocks the walls out but the poison knocks itself out.

Mario: Return!

Peach: Don't give up!

Mario: GO, ICE PUFF!

Tatanga: Oh patooi! An ice type.

Mario: Ice Wave!

Peach: What?

Ice Puff slams the ground and ice chuncks shoot out in a line and shoot out under Shaman.

Tatanga: Bubblebeam!

Mario: Freeze it with Icy Wind!

Ice Puff turns the bubbles to ice and blows them back into Shaman, knocking it out.

Tatanga: GRrrrrrr! Return! GO, DUPLIGHOST!

Mario: Oh!

Tatanga: Transform!

Duplighost turns into a bomb-shooting machine.

Tatanga: FIRE AWAY!

The machine begins shooting Bob-ombs!

Mario: Use Ice Wave!

The ice smashes and cracks the machine into turning back to Duplighost, but Ice Puff takes damage until it gets knocked out.

Mario: Return! GO, BOSS BASS!

Tatanga: HAHA! A FISH! Use Thunder Punch!

Mario: Stockpile!

Duplighost fires repeated thunder punches. Boss Bass would be knocked out if it didn't have so much special defense and Duplighost didn't have so little special attack.

Peach: DO SOMETHING!

Mario: Spit Up!

Boss Bass fires a huge beam, knocking Duplighost out.

Tatanga: Re...re...return! You won. Congrats, Mario.

Mario: WAHOO!

Tatanga: Press on, and I wish for the best.

Mario goes into the elevator and it takes him to a room with a frog.

Wart: You've come far, boy, but I was meant to be an obstacle that was never ment to be passed. I'll win and shroud you in darkness!

Mario: Mamamia!

Wart: BEGIN!
 

Chapter 29: The Power of Darkness

Wart: GO, LANTERN GHOST!

Mario: GO, SPIKE G!

Wart: Flash!

The ghost attempts to blind Spike G but he dodges.

Mario: Spin Kick!

Spike G kicks Lantern Ghost until it begins flashing and turns into Goomba King.

Wart: Hmmmmm?

Mario: YES! USE YOUR MIGHTY KICK!

Goomba King kicks Lantern Ghost into a wall.

Wart: Hahahahhahahahahahaha! Funny! USE YOUR UMBRA WAVE!

A wave of darkness covers the room.

Mario: I can't see!

Wart: But I can!

Mario: Use your Force Stomp!

Goomba King stomps and a tremor forms, knocking Lantern Ghost off its feet.

Wart: NO!

Mario: Use Headbutt!

Goomba King knocks Lantern Ghost out with a heavy ram.

Wart: Return! GO MONSTAR!

Mario: Uh oh...

Wart: USE METEOR WAVE!

A ring of meteors fire outwards from the floor, knocking Goomba King out.

Mario: Return! Go Boss Bass!

Wart: Ah yes, a giant fish.

Mario: Stockpile!

Peach: Eh... again?

Wart: What did you say, little girl?

Peach: Nothing!

Wart: Aha! TAKE IT DOWN FAST!

Monstar charges up for Shadow Ball!

Mario: SPIT UP!

Wart: Shadow Ball!

The blasts collide and both Koopamon are knocked out.

Wart and Mario: RETURN!

Mario: GO, BOOMERANG BRO!

Wart: GO, Swoopula!

Peach: Why such a weak Koopamon?

Wart: Life Leech!

Swoopula latches onto Boomerang Bro and begins to suck out energy.

Mario: Get it off!

Boomerang Bro tries to knock it off but can't.

Mario: NNNOOOOOOOOOO! USE YOUR BOOMERANG CUTTER!

Boomerang Bro throws the boomerang and it comes back and hits Swoopula, knocking it off.

Wart: Not so weak, is it?

Mario: Use your Strength!

Boomerang Bro forms a boulder and slams it over Swoopula, burrying it under rubble.

Wart: Use Psychic!

The rocks raise up and are thrown at Boomerang Bro.

Peach: How did it get Psychic?

Mario: Boomerang Cutter!

The cutter shatters the rocks, protecting Boomerang Bro.

Wart: Heh.

Mario: Hm...

Wart: Use Steel Wing!

Peach: Time to keep track of its moves! Psychic, Life Leech, Steel Wing.

Mario: Slam!

The Koopamon collide and are thrown back.

Wart: Use Aerial Ace!

Swoopula spins and disapears.

Peach: Steel Wing, Life Leech, Aerial Ace, Psychic... GO, MARIO!

Mario: STRENGTH!

Boomerang Bro makes a boulder and Swoopula knocks itself out by ramming it.

Mario, Peach, and Wart: O_O

Wart: You won! I do wish you beat the Champ.

Mario runs by Wart and enters the last elevator.
 

Chapter 30: The Final Battle, The Flames of the Dragon's Rage

Mario and Peach have just reached the balcony, which is 6,000,000 feet over land, to see Bowser.

Mario: MAMAMIA!

Bowser: Welcome, Mario. I have heard you were trying to get here to challenge me.

Mario: Yes, I have.

Bowser: The rules are a bit different.

Mario: How?

Bowser: We'll have two double battles and two single.

Peach: Sounds hard, eh, Mar-

Lemmy and Ludwig barge in.

Lemmy: We're here!

Ludwig: We'll help!

Bowser: GRRR! GET OUT! I may have had the help of a pro but I can still win without help.

Mario: Ready?

Bowser: Whenever you are!

Mario: GO GOOMBA KING AND BOOMERANG BRO!

Bowser: GO RED AND BLUE BLARGG!

Mario: Goomba King and Boomerang Bro, Hyper Cutter!

Bowser: Blue, get in the way and use Protect!

Blue Blargg moves in the way and forms a shield, protecting them.

Mario: NO!

Bowser: Aqua Flush, Blue Blargg, and Lava Flush, Red Blargg!

A water and lava tidal wave rush at Boomerang Bro and Goomba King.

Mario: Jump overhead and Spike Dive, Goomba King!

Both Koopamon jump the wave and Goomba King dives at Blargg from above.

Bowser: WEAK! Use your Dragon Dance!

Both Blarggs glow.

Mario: UH OH!

Bowser: HYPER BEAM!

Mario: Use your Growl, guys!

Both Koopamon heavily weaken the beams with growls, but they still take severe damage.

Mario: NO!

Bowser: NO, I COULD HAVE WHIPPED THEM!

Peach: O_O

Mario: Spin Kick!

Spike G twirls at Red Blargg and lands nine kicks.

Bowser: STOP! Use Flamethrower

Red scorches Goomba King!

Mario: NO! Use your Royal Beam!

Goomba King fires a beam and blasts Red Blargg. The beam continues to hold on and blast it.

Bowser: BIDE!

The Red Blargg begins glowing.

Mario: STOP AND USE SPIN KICK!

Goomba King kicks Red multiple times (11 to be exact).

Bowser: NO!

The kicks knock Red Blargg out.

Bowser: GRRRRR!

Peach: Who's next?

Bowser: The rules are different.

Mario: What?

Bowser: Until both Koopamon are knocked out, the trainer may not replace Koopamon. In other words, to bring out new Koopamon I need to wait until you knock out both Koopamon, if you do. Same with you

Mario: Goomba King, use Royal Beam, and Boomerang Bro, use Hyper Cutter!

Bowser: WAAHAHAHAHHAHAHA! Use Aqua Wave!

The wave knocks out Boomerang Bro! Goomba King's blow knocks out Blue Blargg.

Mario and Bowser: GRR!

Bowser: GO, CZAR DRAGON AND ZOMBONE!

Mario: Spin Kick on Zombone!

Bowser: Combine a Hyper Beam!

The beam wipes Goomba King out.

Mario: Return! Go Bulky Bomb and Para-Worm!

Bowser: Hmmmm...

Mario: Silver Wind, Para-Worm, and Bulky Bomb, use Bulk Up!

Bowser: Use Weight Crush on the ground!

Both Koopamon drop and brace themselves to prevent being blown back. Bulky Bomb charges up and Para-Worm continues to distract them.

Bowser: HYPER BEAM!

Mario: EXPLOSION!

Bulky Bomb runs forward and performs a high-powered explosion, breaking Zombone apart and knocking Czar out. Zombone rebuilds itself.

Mario: Oh, one of those type of pests again. I know what to do here...

Bowser: AVALANCHE!

Boulders fall from nowhere and knock Bulky Bomb out.

Mario: Return!

Bowser: Use your Avalanche!

Mario: Dodge and use Slam!

Para-Worm shatters Zombone and scatters the bones to different parts of the balcony.

Bowser: Return!

Mario: Heh.

Bowser: Now for the big Koopamon! GO REX!

Mario: Use your Silver Wind!

Bowser: Flamethrower!

The flames knock out Para-Worm.

Bowser: Two on two!

Mario: Go Ice Puff!

Bowser: Great... an ice type... FLAMETHROWER!

Mario: Ice Beam!

The attacks collide and cause an explosion.

Mario and Bowser: WHOA!

Mario: Hail!

Bowser: NO!

Hail falls hard.

Mario: Ice Beam!

The beam is inches away but Rex dodges.

Bowser: Heh!

Mario: You didn't command it to dodge.

Bowser: I've trained Rex and my other Koopamon to know how to fight on their own. With their and my power and tactics, we are unbeatable.

Mario: Mamamia!

Bowser: Heh!

Peach: What now?

Lemmy and Ludwig: I never could imagine Dad could get this powerful even with help.

Mario: Use your Ice Beam!

Bowser: Crunch!

Rex dodges and darts forth and chomps on Ice Puff for heavy damage.

Mario: NO!

Bowser: Crunch again!

Mario: Wait... and...

Bowser: Hmmm?

Rex is inches away.

Mario: ICE BEAM!

The beam hits and freezes Rex.

Bowser: WHAT?!

Mario: GOOD ONE!

Peach: Way to go, Mario!

Mario: SLAM!

Ice Puff shatters the ice and sends Rex into the guardrail along the balcony.

Bowser: Dragon Breath!

Mario: End it with Ice Beam!

The blasts combine and explode, causing huge damage to both Koopamon.

Mario: No!

Bowser: What?

Peach: (looking at the colorful explosion) Pretty!

Lemmy: Wow!

Ludwig: Dad has competition, big time.

Mario: Hold on, Ice Puff!

Bowser laughs.

Mario: Ice Beam!

The beam knocks Rex out.

Bowser: Mwahahaha, Return! Now for your end! GO DRAGOHOHO!

Mario: WHOA!

Bowser: Ice Beam!

Mario: Let it hit!

The blast hits and continues to hit Ice Puff.

Bowser: Surprised I am using ice?

Mario: Yes.

Bowser: The ice is being absorbed like a sponge! Like a sponge, the more it holds, the bigger it gets.

Mario: NO!

Mario looks in time to see Ice Puff fall due to being oversized.

Bowser: Thunderbolt!

The bolt knocks Ice Puff out.

Bowser: One on one, Mario.

Mario: I know! GO BOSS BASS!

Bowser: Ah, I see! Much more powerful-looking than the others.

Mario: HYDRO PUMP!

Bowser: Dragon Breath and Flamethrower

A burning green stream barely misses and Boss Bass bounces and its hydro pump hits.

Bowser: Grrrr, use Thunderbolt!

Mario: Splash!

Boss Bass bounces to dodge many bolts, but one hits and paralyzes Boss Bass.

Mario: FACADE!

Bowser: What? How? Impossible!

The slam sends Dragohoho into a wall.

Mario: HAH!

Bowser: Grrr!

Mario: Now for a new move!

Bowser: Oh?

Mario: ICE BEAM!

Bowser: NO WAY!

The blast explodes on contact, knocking Dragohoho out.

Bowser: Return! Mwahahahhahahah!

Mario: Return! I won!

Bowser: GRAG!

Bowser runs forth and Mario vs Bowser begins.

Mario=1000
Bowser=1000

Bowser uses Flamethrower and Mario backflips over it and ground pounds on Bowser.

Bowser: OUCH!

Mario=1000
Bowser=963

Bowser uses an Earthquake attack and knocks Mario over. Bowser then rams Mario into a wall.

Mario=913
Bowser=963

Mario: Take this!

Bowser: What?

Mario runs forward, spin jumps, and combines his fists and feet for multiple kicks and punches that throw Bowser into a wall.

Mario=913
Bowser=902

Mario: Gain hammer power!

Bowser: Oh poot.

Bowser hacks up a fireball that strikes Mario, and Mario hits Bowser with four hammers.

Mario=868
Bowser=862

Mario and Bowser: BRING IT!

Mario hits Bowser six more times and Bowser double claws Mario, and both collide with a wall for extra damage.

Mario=799
Bowser=777

Mario: GAIN STAR POWER!

Mario rams Bowser and throws him into the air. He crashes on Mario's head.

Mario=729
Bowser=699

Peach: Can I help?
Ludwig: Oh no you don't!

Peach=200
Ludwig=200

Mario throws Bowser into Ludwig

Mario=729
Bowser=659
Peach=200
Ludwig=134

Peach goes to whack Bowser with a frying pan but it slips and hits Mario.

Mario=683
Bowser=659
Peach=200
Ludwig=134

Mario uses a Star and collides with everyone. All four take damage

Mario=621
Bowser=614
Peach=98
Ludwig=87

Mario repeats this waring out his Star power.
Mario=563
Bowser=563
Peach=3
Ludwig=9

Lemmy and Roy: Here we come!

Lemmy=200
Roy=200

Bowser scorches all of them.

Mario=503
Bowser=563
Peach=0
Ludwig=0
Lemmy=0
Roy=0

Mario: Mamamia!

Bowser: GO DOWN ALREADY!

Mario and Bowser slam into each other.

Mario=467
Bowser=478

Mario spin kicks again.

Mario=467
Bowser=389

Bowser retaliates by kicking Mario.

Mario=333
Bowser=389

Mario jumps into a Kuribo's Shoe and jumps on Bowser for huge, huge amounts of damage.
Mario=333
Bowser=201

Bowser jumps in a Kuribo's Shoe too and kicks Mario.
Mario=167
Bowser=201

Both land another kick and fly from the boot into a wall.
Mario=89
Bowser=86

Bowser eats Mario.

Bowser: Done! MWAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA ack, ack oof oof!

Bowser=66
Bowser=46
Bowser=26
Bowser=6
Bowser= -26

Bowser spits out Mario and Mario, who had been spin jumping inside Bowser, kicks Bowser over the balcony and watches him take a HUGE fall.

Mario: Wahoo!

Outside...

Mario: I did it!

Roy, Ludwig, and Lemmy: We must return to our gyms. It was a pleasure meeting and battling with you, Mario.

The gym leaders run off.

Jr : Me too.

Jr leaves as well.

Peach: Goodbye, Mario.

Peach kisses Mario and walks away, crying to have to leave.

Cackletta: Well, you did it. I am proud to see the rise of a new Champ.

Smithy: It was a terrific honor to travel with you, Mario, and I hope we cross paths again.

Tatanga: I can say you're one unbelievable trainer, Mario, and battling you was the best thing ever. I hope you return

Wart: I guess while you're gone I can rule as leader here. Mario, our battle was amazing and having it makes me not mad but happy. I am proud of you.

Elite 4: We must return to our posts.

Mario: Goodbye, everyone!

Mario runs over the hills into the horizon, thus ending his journey to become a Koopamon Champ. Mario and E. Gadd party and Peach comes to visit often and they visit the gym leaders and Elite 4 now and then. Mario has acomplished his goal and is crowned best trainer and lives happily ever after.

The End

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